hi! nice image in your title. a bit difficult to read the text though. perhaps a different color or placement? and, as we had discussed wednesday, the images in the right column may be conflicting with your showcase work. perhaps changing the transparency on the images to reduce their vibrancy? just a thought.
The image that you have in your title is very good and shows your personality, however the rest of your blog doesn't reflect your personality very much. Some of your blog posts have bold and bigger words in the para. This does show their importance but I would even maybe change the color of those words to stand out even more. You're pictures are white so they stand out against the black background but when you have darker images you might want to rethink you background color or the color of your border around those images.
I agree with denise, I really enjoy your image for your title. But I would have to say that your blog does not show very much personality. Is there a way that you could maybe put more of a focus on the work that you have done to express a little more of your design personality?
Hey , I really like your title, but perhaps just adjust the higlights so we can see the text over that fabulous graphic. I LOVE your sketches of New York architecture. I not only shows where you've been, but what your strengths are in sketching. Putting up old work is a great way to see what you've done and where you're going. I really like your profile picture...it shows personality. The whole bog possesses a lot of personality. Looks good! Allisyn
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hi! nice image in your title. a bit difficult to read the text though. perhaps a different color or placement? and, as we had discussed wednesday, the images in the right column may be conflicting with your showcase work. perhaps changing the transparency on the images to reduce their vibrancy? just a thought.
The image that you have in your title is very good and shows your personality, however the rest of your blog doesn't reflect your personality very much. Some of your blog posts have bold and bigger words in the para. This does show their importance but I would even maybe change the color of those words to stand out even more. You're pictures are white so they stand out against the black background but when you have darker images you might want to rethink you background color or the color of your border around those images.
I agree with denise, I really enjoy your image for your title. But I would have to say that your blog does not show very much personality. Is there a way that you could maybe put more of a focus on the work that you have done to express a little more of your design personality?
Hey ,
I really like your title, but perhaps just adjust the higlights so we can see the text over that fabulous graphic.
I LOVE your sketches of New York architecture. I not only shows where you've been, but what your strengths are in sketching.
Putting up old work is a great way to see what you've done and where you're going.
I really like your profile picture...it shows personality. The whole bog possesses a lot of personality.
Looks good!
Allisyn
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